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Surrender

15:55 Jan 05 2010
Times Read: 674


On your knees is the best view for me

to see you trying not to breathe

lips quivering

I cannot believe, you thought you'd suceed....

I love the idea of happy lies

in your eyes

shut sooooo tight

a raven without flight, brought you down to size....



On your knees it's oh so sweet

bite my lips to hear the rapid beat

on your knees it's oh so sweet

fangs crave such a delightful treat



from me you can never escape

Your pain will never fade

such heartbreak

can't you see, no keys to your cage....

looking down upon you i will steal

every cut you'll feel

never to heal

now it's time, for your turn of the wheel



On your knees it's oh so sweet

bite my lips to hear the rapid beat

on your knees it's oh so sweet

fangs crave such a delightful treat



Copyright © 2010 J.E.A.


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vega
vega
00:29 Mar 31 2011

I like it as it entertained my imagination (which is what any good poetry would do).








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